Trust

Posted on August 31, 2015 by Suzanne

I want to show you the love you’ve always deserved.

But how do I know you won’t desert me like all the others?

Copyright Suzanne Norton 2015

P.S.  I invite you to add two of your own lines to this piece, in the comments section.  Let see what happens!  It will be fun!

About Suzanne

I write poetry and other stuff. Writing is a part of my soul. Other practices that feed me .... yoga, Tai Chi, Qigong, meditation, hiking, cycling, dancing, Acroyoga, creating, hugs, cuddling.
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7 Responses to Trust

  1. lorieb says:
    February 15, 2016 at 9:21 pm

    how do I know you are the one
    to stick around when all’s not fun

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  2. serendipitous blah says:
    August 31, 2015 at 10:26 pm

    Faith is the essence of trust.

    One must have trust in endings in order to have the right beginning.

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  3. serendipitous blah says:
    August 31, 2015 at 10:17 pm

    Your actions define your words … but what if they’ve been lost in translation.
    With your trust, prove me right or prove wrong.
    Only then I shall gracefully accept the conclusion.

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  4. adwitiyadixit says:
    August 31, 2015 at 6:57 pm

    I want to show you the love you’ve always deserved.
    But how do I know you won’t desert me like all the others?
    To find the courage in me to say “I’m reserved”
    How can I ensure your footsteps, the distance could cover?

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